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Alison New
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Hi guys - would anyone be able to critique my first scene written in first person - past tense? Also the introspection is in past tense. It’s a middle grade modern fairy tale. 

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  • You had a number of offers, including me, in the Children's books group.

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    • Thanks Kate - that’s marvelous. I’ll take a look. I’m still navigating my way around Townhouse. :)

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      • Sorry to be a pain. How do I view the offers? 

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        • If you go to the groups tab and select children’s books group. Then scroll down to your original post. Click on the little reply bubbles below and the responses should come up.

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          • Thank you Kate. Will do. And thank you for your offer. How can I sent my first scene to you?

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            • If you click on me it will take you to my profile. I think in the 3 little dots there’s an option to message me. You can attach a file there. Or go straight to messaging and type in my name and find me that way. I’ll look forward to reading.

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