Hi again, folks.
I'm pushing my luck asking for more help, but I'm near the end point, and nervous.
Below is my ebook description. I'll need to trim it for print, but getting this right is a good start. I would be most appreciative if you would provide comments, and some help with vivid verbs or power text would be great. Lastly, any guidance with categories would be a tremendous help. Thanks, Rob.
CLASH OF GODS.
The gods of old still interfere with humankind—but Angus MacDonald has his own rules. This page-turning thriller, the first in the CLASH OF GODS series, sets human against deities and the costs are extreme.
In this installment of Rob J. Pearce’s thriller about the ancient gods of mythology, Angus MacDonald must learn to fight an evil bent on enslaving humankind. His woes begin during a visit to a Scottish battlefield where a blue pendant, eons old, became lost during the Battle of Culloden. Its owner, Lord Duncan MacDonald, died as an English musket ball shattered his neck and mud claimed the treasure. Its discovery grants power, but with it comes a threat unprecedented in human history.
Angus did not find the blue pendant; it lay for three-hundred years waiting while powers completed preparations, unknown to him, for the seemingly impossible task ahead. Gods, determined to gain the power of the pendant, follow Angus to America where they unleash catastrophic pain on an unprepared populace.
Beginning in Scotland, then playing out in Washington, D.C., and Malmstrom on the Great Plains, the adventure moves from one climax to another with disaster but a step behind. The Pentagon and government are out of their depth and lost in this world of unknown supernatural powers; Angus and his friends fight alone against overpowering odds.
Through sheer strength of will and revenge for losing his trusted friend, he learns to use the ancient power. But the road is long, his courage tested, and his hopes for the future, uncertain.
A novel unique in plot, surprises and twists throughout, and dramatic battles fought in ways never seen. New takes on action abound in this fast-paced original thriller.
P.S. My visibility is set on 'public.' What should I set it on so just Jericho readers can see?