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Hi Harvey and members,

I have a short story to offer to the group for feedback. It is currently offered to a couple of competitions, but regarding publication, I do have a somewhat pathetic strike rate-12 out of 76. Towards the end, I change the POV. Not sure how well that works. It's titled Leaving Without Looking Back-1500 words

Bryan

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  • I’m a newbie, but I’d be happy to take a look, Bryan.

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    • Hello Bryan. I'll give it a whirl.

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