Well, it's 2021 and my first major act is to post the opening chapter of my W.I.P. for critique. If any Jericho members can take the time to read it and would like to make any comments, this would be appreciated.
Apart from any problems you might see, I'd especially like to know what impression you get of what is to come in the story. Generally,how would you anticipate it continues? Does it come over as a cosy domestic story? (That isn't what I want it to do). Not all of the clues can be there at this early stage.
I should explain that "Opus VI" is just a working title.
I look forward to receiving any comments.