Good day fellow writers,
I'm looking for feedback on this plot summary for my book. I'm patterning it after the one on page 19 of Bingham's book about Pride and Prejudice): (mine is about 35 words)
Magen Khent is a perfectionist who wants to be happy. For the past 30 years, she has tried myriad therapies to no real avail. She finally discovers the power of self-compassion and self-care.
REVISED (thanks to Emmaloo and Rick and the magic of time)
Magen Khent's struggle with depression and anxiety has come to a head: either keep trying myriad therapies as she has for the past thirty years or choose to end her life.
1. Is the shape / structure clear?
2. Is anything missing (to make it clearer)?
3. How could I make it more concise? (p. 20 - Harry talks about this)
4. Any constructive feedback is welcome.