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  • Thanks Cathy, that is very helpful. I have been rewriting the piece and your opinion added to the general feeling that it was too ‘telly’, so I’ve been working on trying to show her reactions and general fear of this big city she hardly knows. It should be a much better piece when I’ve finished. Thanks.

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