Comment to 'Tone'
Comment to Tone
  • I was worrying about where and how to add some description and found this place, and cut the rest of the sentence

    I look at her eyes in the mirror as they try and bore into me for appreciation. Looking back to the window I see my reflection. They always say I’m cute when they meet me, smaller than they were expecting. My hair is never just brown, it’s lush, deep, or rich. The women seem to like my eyes, one said they were soulful. When I asked my worker what that meant she said ‘sad.’

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