Comment to 'Beta reader for science fiction'
  • Thanks for reading.  I take it from your comments you didn't like it.   That's fine. I start with several characters at the beginning.  I thought of making the first three short chapters into a prologue but decided against it. 

    I purposely made the beginning mysterious to drag the reader into the book so they would have to figure out what was going on.  A bit of a mystery around the programmer, how the farmer and his son Morgan fit in, and, finally, the main event concerning Jay and Tee.

    I have had a couple of comments on the fonts.  Thanks for the feedback.

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    • To me, it’s not a black or white, like or not like. Just conveying my own impressions :)

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