Comment to 'ROOTS, a short excerpt posted for feedback'
  • I actually quite like the occasional gentler pace and pause for reflection in a book. And, for me at least, this didn't feel slow at all.

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    • Entirely agree, a wonderful "soft - human" extract. Something I have tried to capture but have often been put off by advice to be more "snappy". I believe that it is important to capture these kinds of moments. 

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