Comment to 'Feedback on Chapter 1 and 2'
  • Hi Laure. 

    Wow thank you so much! I think I had an inkling it was too wordy but your example and advice really helps clarify why. I can't tell you how useful this is. I am actually looking forward to editing it with this in mind. Thank you so much for spending the time to go over it. I really appreciate it. 

    All the best


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