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  • Hi Kate

    Thank you very much for taking the time to go over this and explain so clearly. That is really helpful and I will have a good look over those pages from Emma Darwin.  I was vaguely aware that I should cut out words such as thought, wonder, saw, etc. but I hadn't got as far in my understanding as to apply this to actions too.  This is so useful to have this explained.    

    I do intentionally use free indirect speech but I definitely don't have a full handle on the other levels of PD so I will delve into that too and see if I can wrap my head around it.  

    As I said to L yesterday I am really looking forward to revising with this in mind so thank you again.

    Best wishes


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