The feedback you have received is amazing because your writing is rather amazing. In spite of the criticisms (justified), your storytelling makes a real impact and I think we would all like to read more.
Thank you so much, it really means a lot to me. Writing isn’t always easy especially at a young age, and there are days where I and I’m sure many other writers have doubts, so seeing such a great response to my writing really gave me the boost I needed. I’m still working on improving my craft and the valuable feedback I’ve received so far will definitely help with that. Thank you once again, I’m so glad I finally took the step to upload my work, it really paid off.