Comment to 'Writing'
Comment to Writing
  • I like this, Danny. Some great lines: 'arse-a-gram' for example. And the finish was a real shocker - in a good way. A couple of the 21st century references are from the 20th century (women threw themselves under racehorses and burning their bras). There's some issues with the formatting too (the indents are not all correct). But it's a nice start. Keep it up.  

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