Comment to 'Writing'
Comment to Writing
  • I really liked it Danny. I like the tone and the pace and I immediately want to know more of Natalie's story.  

    I'm impressed by the editing notes made by others in the comments and since I can't hope to add anything of equal use, I shall simply say that having read this I would want to read the rest of the book. 

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    • Thank you Alice  good to know.

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