Comment to 'Feedback request - Contemporary Fantasy opening chapters'
  • Interesting differences. Because of Rick and Julie’s comments I read the piece again and I didn’t find it confusing at all. Moreover, I think the backstory is good because now you know what to expect from the interaction with Davey.

    I did think it was better on a second reading! 

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    • Thanks so much, Georgina! Can I use that last sentence in the cover of I ever get published? 😊

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