Comment to 'Feedback request - Contemporary Fantasy opening chapters'
  • Wow Lynn! I loved this. I am no expert but as a reader I would buy this book. I think the characters are beautifully portrayed. The opening grabbed me in and the whole thing delivered on that promise. It is a really unique idea. The descriptions of depression are excellent. The little details throughout such as the surfer dude therapist and the free sample tea bags are lovely. The relationships work nicely. I’m sure you will find the right agent soon.

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    • Thank you so much, Kate. What a lovely comment- you had me grinning from ear to ear! I'll revise and see what this agent says in the 1 to 1 next month. Your never know, he might have some positives to say. Thank you again for making my day 😊

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