Comment to 'Feedback request - Contemporary Fantasy opening chapters'
  • Hi Connie and thanks so much for this. I'm so glad you felt it had promise. 

    Rewriting the opening right now - and cutting chunks of the journey out as I go! Maybe I'll take another look and cut even more... I'll reread (again :) ) and revise.

    Thanks for taking the time to read it. 

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