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  • Once upon a dream... When an artist travels to Europe, marries a French Count and restores his château, she discovers real life doesn’t quite live up to the “princess myth”.

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    • I think this is good, but could be re-worded to be shorter. And emmaloo's point about indicating what sort of story it is is a really good one, as is her suggested re-work.

       Is it a modern retelling of the Bluebeard story, a light frothy romcom, or a literary tale of unfulfilled dreams?


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      • Thank you Jon for writing. This is a memoir, romantic and transformative.  I'll try and work those words into this and let you know how it reads.  Hello from California! 

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