Comment to 'What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?'
  • Alright, let's take a stab at this:

    Young Jack survived the Raze, becoming the Duke’s heir and entering knight school – all while guarding a deep secret. Jack is dead and Alivia is impersonating him.

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    • 'But Jack is not actually, Jack. What the hell?!'

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      • Robert Pearce is that a good what the hell? As in, 'I'm intrigued and want to know more.' OR is that a bad what the hell? As in, 'I have no idea what that means.'

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        • sounds like a good one to me

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