Comment to 'What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?'
  • Orchids in Paradise pitch:

    A betrayed housewife takes on the clandestine world of international finance when she files for divorce on an idyllic tax haven island.

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    • Thank you for your feedback. I've tried expanding it a bit but still going round in circles! 

      A betrayed housewife takes on her husband and the tax-haven island which hides his secrets. With the help of three other divorcing women, she follows a trail through the clandestine world of off-shore finance back to Africa, where she once met a poor boy she promised to help. Her husband isn’t the only one out to stop her...

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      • Thank you Robert. An improvement on my effort, for sure. I'm actually trying to write a novel about the ills of tax evasion, but not sure that's going to grab anyone!

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        • I think it depends on the story you build around the tax evasion, Cassandra. What you've got sounds good to me.

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