Comment to 'What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?'
  • I love the premise of this story, Jon. 

    Here's my stab at trying to shorten the pitch - 20 words!!

    A mythical machine can eradicate the world's imperfections. A limbless thief must choose which version of herself gets to exist. 

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    • Thanks emmaloo! There's definitely something there! 🙂 

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