Comment to 'What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?'
  • An art restorer accidentally discovers the portrait of a mysterious young woman hidden beneath a canvas. Investigations into the painting reveal deadly secrets connected to her life in German-occupied Italy during WWII. [34 words]

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    • I really like that second option. It creates serious tension. (I just hope the story is written with interweaving timelines.)

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      • Hi Emmaloo,

        Sorry, it's taken me sooooo long to get back to you. Thanks so much for taking the time to feedback on my pitch - love both suggestions - will have to give it a bit more thought! 

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        • Hi Rick,

          Thanks for your comment. Yes, it does have the interweaving timelines.


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