Comment to What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?
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Thank you Jon for you comments. This is the new version;
For artist Gigi, marrying Count Patrick reveals that the 'princess' lifestyle she had dreamed of is a fallacy – yet propels her on a transformative journey of social acceptance, deep love and loss.
This also address Rick's comment (thank you Rick) of the story arc moving towards the events. The two adjectives; social (acceptance) and deep (love and loss), hopefully makes it less generic.
Your thoughts? Wishing you happy holidays
Gianne
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