Comment to 'What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?'
  • Thank you Jon for you comments.  This is the new version;

    For artist Gigi, marrying Count Patrick reveals that the 'princess' lifestyle she had dreamed of is a fallacy – yet propels her on a transformative journey of social acceptance, deep love and loss. 

    This also address Rick's comment (thank you Rick) of the story arc moving towards the events. The two adjectives; social (acceptance) and deep  (love and loss), hopefully makes it less generic.

    Your thoughts?  Wishing you happy holidays

    Gianne 

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