Comment to 'What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?'
  • Oh wow, your story sounds REALLY good!

    Okay, with this new info, here's my 2nd stab if it helps (it's a bit long, though, at 31 words):

    Two very different women wish their families would appreciate them more. A new drug promises to trigger this appreciation, but the doctor who created it is not the saviour he seems.

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    • Ah amazing, I can definitely work with this! Thank you so much :) 

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