Comment to 'What's the elevator pitch for your WIP?'
  • This sounds very good to me, Michael. It's interesting how sometimes just moving words or sentences around can improve things. Nefarious organization now sounds like something to pique an agent's interest. And you've cut down the whole thing very well.

    See what other people think. And if you have a chance to get professional feedback on the pitch, that could be very worthwhile.

    Happy 2021!

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    • Thanks for taking the time again.

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