Comment to 'Feedback on reworked Chap 1'
  • Thank you so much Kate – it is really useful to hear what you enjoyed and I am glad that everyone is saying the same thing about there being too much vying for their attention.  I think I will try and strip it back to the core question and try and be ruthless in dumping/shifting the rest.   I really appreciate the time you have taken responding the chapter!  

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