Thanks for your lovely comments. Oh my goodness, you've cracked it! You bloody genius, you! Boom. Start with the reality Filter, it's only the title of the book, haha.
Thank you so much. Honestly, it really is amazing what other people see when you've been stuck in a rut.
Every comment on this post so far has been so helpful and eye opening. Your a wonderful group.
I'm glad to help! Finding the right words for giving feedback (and wondering if I'm blundering) is almost as hard as posting your own work, so I'm happy it was useful!
I know what you mean! I always worry that I'll offend someone!