Rachel, I really like this. I am a GP and I too have seen that real life is often way stranger than fiction! I have various funny stories that may morph themselves into a book at some point. I am afraid I have no idea how to write a query letter so i would bow to the greater knowledge on here. However from your synopsis I would read your book. Good luck with it.
Thanks Kate. Life is really, really bizarre isn't it? I hope you're managing to stay safe in your role at the moment, it's all a bit nuts, isn't it? Thanks for your kind words, just by yourself and others saying that the story sounds interesting is good to know, as that's half the battle won, right there.
As others have said, there is some definite work that needs to be done, but I feel like I'm not a million miles away.