Comment to 'Feedback on synopsis of my first finished novel, please.'
  • Hi Yvonne, and welcome,

    I thought it sound intriguing but I wondered if you could highlight in the synopsis why Mia had a change of heart and discovered she did love Josh.  Otherwise, I thought it was good and something I’d like to read... maybe, a very small point, but the Dr WHO saved his life, not that, at least in UK English. Good luck with your novel.

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    • Thank you. I’ll make that change immediately.

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