Comment to 'The walls of time and space'
  • Fiona comes across as extremely likeable, loveable even! 

    I'm nervous however of going off on a limb with metaphor, if I can't see how it ties in with my character's experience or theme I won't go there. I'd need some reason my character would be thinking of astronauts, even if it was just having something on the TV in the background in an earlier scene. Maybe I'm too strict on myself, maybe it's a style thing.

    Nice writing though.

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