Comment to 'White chairs, green terraces'
  • It all depends on (a) the mood of the rest of the work, and (b) the author's style. My work is modern, gritty, so --

    Glittering foliage overhanging the path. White wicker chairs. 

    So no sentences, no unnecessary words. Get on with the story.


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    • Yep, good Eric. Don't think foliage is likely to glitter especially, so maybe a different adjective there. And yes: different books need different approaches.

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