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  • Hi Janet. This is a lovely extract. I agree with your editor. Names of violence could be read as literal. I.e. Bludgeon Street, or Masacre Road. The extra words add the literary effect for me.

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    • Hi Jimmy, Good point. It's amazing how each comment focuses another angle. Thanks so much. 

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