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  • Hi Maggie, Yes, it certainly does give me something to work with. I didn’t like ‘raised on’ at all either. ‘…familiar to her from childhood’ is very nice. I really appreciate all your support.

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    • Nothing like expressing oneself twice! I could not find the first post; it was hiding somewhere.

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