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  • Not sure I can help here. I would tend to get more anxious with lack of sleep. But I shall endeavour.

    Maybe something like

    The thought of facing his neighbour sent an annoyance to his stomach. 'Who cares,' said last nights lack of sleep. He would listen to that fatigue, not brave not bold, not giving a shit. .....etc

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    • Thanks Charlie! I also like the idea of an internal monologue here.

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