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  • Alan, Thankyou for sharing your story. You mentioned that the story is longer so I wasnt sure if these are exerpts or not. There are a few things that confuse me about the story. From what I can tell the protagonist has ridden in the back of the truck from Syria to France. He would have to go through Turkey, eastern block countries and across Europe. It is not very believable that he would be in the same vehicle all this way. I was also confused about there being a Saudi judge. You might want to research more. That's a good place to start. Wish you the best on the story. I look forward to seeing the finished product.

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