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  • Thanks Nancy for reading and commenting. I am really chuffed that you like the premise and want to know more! If the premise is rubbish there’s no point working at editing it. As feedback seems good for the premise then it is worth me learning more and editing away to make it work.😀I agree that sentence is a bit clunky. I’ll have a tinker with it. Thanks again

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    • You're welcome Kate!

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