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  • Hi Anne, thanks for commenting and not at all offended. It's good to get feedback. 

    I like playing around with rhyme schemes and metre, sometimes it works and sometimes not. I guess it is all a matter of how it sounds in one's head. It's a shame that we can't post our readings, it would be interesting to hear different interpretations of the same piece.

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    • Yes, that would be wonderful.  I'd love to hear you read your poem.  I'm sure it would sound deep and yet embroidered with notes of humour.  Keep up the good work.

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