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  • No trouble at all, Alex. It's not so much action I searched for per se. Whether it's backstory or scene setting, albeit good writing and interesting characters, I just felt it a bit too much, and lacking the necessary elements to drive the story forward.
    However, as Catherine stated, the characters are believable. The kind of characters that are rooted for despite their roguish actions.

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    • Thanks for the clarification, Jimmy. I will consider your comments carefully and appreciate the feedback.

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