Comment to 'My book is too long. Around 250k words total. Right now it only ...'
  • You've got the luxury of challenging every sentence for excess. Make sure you never use more than one adjective, or one description. For example if you have wriiten 'he was breathing hard and sweating' go with either he was breathing hard' or 'he was sweating'.

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    • In this way, I might be able to cut every sentence in half. That's an interesting challenge. Thank you.

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      • Less is often more!

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