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Hello and welcome to the new Community! This forum is free to writers all over the world and is…
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Hi folks and a happy New Year to all.Until today my first in series of When Gods Clash had a rating …
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  •  · Gloating!? I need to build confidence as we're off to Pakistan and India. Can't see me 'gloating' to…
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Hello lovely people. I posted this in the children’s group but I don’t think many people look at the…
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  •  · I would suggest, Kate, that you have learned too much in the intervening years to tie yourself to wh…
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Hello all,I wonder if anyone can give me some suggestions on the start to my first novel for Young A…
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  •  · There's a lot of potential in that opening, but as the previous reviewers mentioned already, there a…
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hi all. happy new year.if anyone has time a quick look over this first draft chapter and maybe some …
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  •  · great stuff. thanks 
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Hi Jericho! I am new here :) Last year at this time I finished my first novel. I was working with an…
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  •  · Hi Roxanna, I'm late as well but as I only joined on 6th January ... I'd be happy to read a few chap…
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Hi everyone, I wrote a memoir combined with a self-help section. I just received my manuscript back …
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  •  · Hi Jaye, thank you for your opinion! It does get clear right at the next paragraph that the wave is …
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... I was writing for my grand-daughter for Christmas. I put this and the other one (TELL ME A STORY…
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  •  · Thanks guys! I'm still playing with some of the pics (my DH pointed out the zebra in the second last…
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Hello fellow word-wranglersJericho guidelines recommend that I be clear about context and audience, …
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  •  · Marvelous - thanks so much for taking the time to feedback.
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Any help or advice is appreciated as well as criticism.
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  •  · Thank you for your comments. I read a book recently that the opening paragraph was in the present te…
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I'm currently working on my query package for my first novel, Skin Shedders, and was wondering if an…
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  •  · You are very eloquent for a 14 year old - my daughter is 13 and communicates with grunts and gesture…
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Feedback appreciated Chapter TwoThe school holidays seemed to go on forever, it was a shock when Ell…
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  •  · Thanks Neil for the feedback. Very helpful, I’ll definitely incorporate your suggestions. Much appre…