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Feedback request

Hello residents of Townhouse. 

In light of recent conversation about feedback being publicly accessible, would anyone be willing to recieve a private message containing a piece for a Novellette-in-Flash competition?

It is of just over 4k words.

The requirement was to create small stand alone stories of no more than 500 words each that all fit into the whole narrative arc.

This was written a good few months ago, but the competition was cancelled and has now reopened. 

It hasn't been touched since, and I'm not even going to look at it prior to sending to any willing participants. I believe (or hope at least) that my writing has evolved a little since then, and don't want to tamper with it yet.

Any feedback would be most welcome. Particularly if you think each stories work as stories within themselves. And I suppose I'm kinda wanting to know if it needs a complete rewrite, and need to ask myself if I'm willing to do it.


Thank you. I'm off to write something else now.

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    • It’s a yes from me.

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      • Thanks Angela. I'll ping it over.

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        • Sounds interesting. Happy to read.

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          • Why, thank you Kate.

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          • I'm new to the community (just joined over the weekend) but I'm happy to take a look as well.

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            • Cool, thanks, Christa. And welcome.

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