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author of The Actuality
fear makes her human // humans make her fear
Sandstone Press February 2021
visit me at paulbraddon.com / Twitter at @paulbraddon / Instagram at @paulbraddon
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Added a comment to Cheeks Sent Me High
Some athletes such as tennis players use routines based on NLP to enter the state of flow, like bouncing the ball a set number of times before a serve. I loved the way that Leylah Fernandez kicks her legs behind her before she serves, in a kind of dance, it's so sweet and girlish and obviously works very well!
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I really enjoyed this piece because of the way it explored and described so eloquently what is in essence a higher state. I believe finding this special state becomes easier the more you find it.
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I am trying to research what engine such a vessel as the ones below in the 1920's / 30s would have had. I presume it would be powered by diesel. I am particularly interested in how to start it - would that be by a cord or a crank or a key?
I've been googling without luck. Any help welcome!
You've got the luxury of challenging every sentence for excess. Make sure you never use more than one adjective, or one description. For example if you have wriiten 'he was breathing hard and sweating' go with either he was breathing hard' or 'he was sweating'.
Thanks V. I really enjoyed Klara and the Sun. I love the premise, particularly the period with Klara in the store, she's so innocent. The way that Klara processes complex information by seeing it in boxes is a stroke of cubist genius. He's such a unique writer that it's pointless musing how one would have perhaps tackled things later differently, as he is what he is! You just have to suspend what you know about how people behave and accept his 'reality'.
Thanks L, always getting that one wrong!